Boston College Personal Statement

Personal statement instruction? In 1,000-1,500 words, describe your academic and professional goals, any experience relevant to this program, and your future plans, expectations, and aspirations. ?program website?https://www.bc.edu/content/bc-web/schools/lynch-school/academics/departments/idpg/ma-learning-engineering.html#appid=info-item-2?I have attached what I have written and I need it edited and polished to professional standards? my editing expectation? 1. polish my tone more confidently. 2. correct grammar mistakes 3. deep structural edit 4. elevate my writing skills 5. clearly present my study goals to admission officer: design tools using UX research methods and digital technologies to help teachers analyzing students’ learning experience Many many thanks! I have 5 more personal statements on the way, hope to get an amazing delivery. So I can work with you on all of my remaining orders.